The improvement my SQR1 needed was to make my summary a little longer because it was to short, other than that it was pretty fine. The things that me and my partners noticed about my SQR1 was that I need to cite my reference beter, I had it in quotes but I did not put page where I found the quote or did I put the author or title of paper. I learned how to cite a page beter in this SQR1.